User blog comment:GrandMethuselah67/Character Sheet 1: Vance Mattingly/@comment-4867780-20150418132647/@comment-26322734-20150418170410

Agh! Math error. It actually IS the year 4031, so I'll have to fix that.

Yeah, the story is definitely a work in progress. I'll have to polish everything; think of the current story as sort of a place holder. I plan on elaborating on the lore and stuff. So yeah, this all definitely needs polishing and editing.

Y'know, I was sort of thinking that to myself as I made this character. Form manipulation and Essence manipulation not fitting the character and the setting. I'll have to rethink his powers. The whole thing about his powers is he was born a metahuman on top of being genetically engineered, so I've thought of separate powers for him. Thanks!

Also, ya got me! Yeah, the Cestus of Goliath were inspired by those. I just really like the idea of weapons with multiple modes and applications. Thanks again.

Overall, this bio is definitely a work in progress. Thanks for the constructive criticism! I'll admit that I have gone into this a little hastily, so I'll learn from my mistakes.

PS: How do you feel about the whole "multiversal secret agency" thing? This character and setting aren't really new for me. He's actually a revamped version of another character I've had. I've actually been developing the lore of this setting for years, so I might end up making a "Word of God" blog, yanno?