User blog comment:Dragon-Fox 7/Character Sheet/@comment-4867780-20160421085648

Life style, last paragraph/sentence : I think it is "torment" rather than "tournament "

"The applications to my capabilities are as limitless as all the atoms inside my entire body."

"...as limitless as the number of particles in the entire multiverse." sounds kind of cooler :D

I think it would be cooler if John had five Singular powers rather than four,, it would make a great metaphor like the Five Fingers of the Hand of God (five fingers like a human, powerful like a god).

I love John's Equality move when it comes to fighting, great trick for a being pf overwhelming power to even the odds and get back the sheer thrill of serious battle, make each of them worthwhile and constantly surpass himself.

Lawrence often does it too through template shifting (changing his abilities and power-level to match his opponent), though I guess it's more like balancing the gameplay for extra fun to him, since his primary powers can't be de-activated.