User blog comment:Grand's Story Time/The Champions of Terra/@comment-26877734-20151129020133

Dolan arrived at the line for his terminal. He had spent all of his credits to pay for this vacation, and he didn't want to waste a single minute of it. He saw the long line in front of him. "Damn, there goes my plan for saving time." he thought to himself, muttering a curse under his breath as he got in the back of the line. He noticed something was...off. Everyone was seemingly looking in one direction, as if there were something holding their attention. But there wasn't anything giving it away blatantly as to what they were looking at, so, what could it be? He peered over into the direction they were all looking in...

(I got a 2. Yay?)