User blog comment:DYBAD/Character Sheet/@comment-11764949-20160524040738

Alright DYBAD, I know I offered some "constructive criticism" earlier this month, I've got some more, so please don't be offended by it, I just enjoy discussing this stuff. But the more I've been thinking about it (the fact I'm thinking about it shows how little of a life I have) there's something that bothers me about Lawrence and I finally put my finger on it. He has delusional disorder. Now before you start defending the great god you've created hear me out. "Lawrence" is one of the shards of the orignial state of the universe,no? He's a glitch in the system of the omniverse. A part that lacked the ability to evolve but possesed the ability to assimilate. When the shard assimilates a human being, it gains everything that goes with it (kinda like a genie we know): sentience, desire, idenity, and flaws. The shard/person then goes to assimilate everything it can find until it becomes a rapidly approaching nigh-omnipotent near-divine being. As a human it then manipulates and conditions women from across all multiverses to live in his private domain as their s3# (keeping it PG) god. He even convinces himself that its a utopia and they'd be truely and perfectly happy there. He also manages to convince himself that he is a perfectly neutral being that just happens to help or harm people by accident, and then splits himself into multiple identiied to satisfy his endless curiosity. You even argued that the reason he wasn't good because he didn't leave utopia's in his wake. Even though any utopia as defined by him would likely be torture to some of the inhabitants. Really, he just seems like an out of control, power-hungry teenager to me. Frankly if he ever went to my fictional multiverse, he would likely get killed by the inhabitants (and yes they have a way to do that, it would just take a LONG time) simply because they would be conviced he in one way or another will eventually break the omniverse. sorry for the critism and wall of text. I eagerly await your responce.