User blog comment:The 2nd Existential Seed/Hitomi/@comment-5265497-20160409235107/@comment-28898344-20160410141314

"@CoolCat: Your bunch of characters with their Too-great-for-you-primitives-to-understand quotes are not any less Mary Sue/Gary Stu. At least this blog has something interesting to read about."

This where I must rebuke you, Morgan. Cat's characters have a plethora of interesting information to gleam if you understood the simple fact that they're all, for the most part, interconnected and forming an intricate plot, one that grows and thickens as more characters are created. But I digress.

Cat's characters are quite the opposite of Mary Sue/Gary Stu because of the simple fact that they're not loved by everyone, they have to actually work to achieve their goals, their powers are not ridiculous and entirely out of place (easily explanable and they make sense in context), an actual plot can be formed from them (quite an intriguing one I might add), and lastly they're well made and thought out. The scope of the conflict Cat is drawing out is immense and cosmic in scale, so of course "Too-great-for-you-primitives-to-understand quotes" were inevitable, and often more than not justified.

Compare anyone of The 2nd Existential Seed's characters to Cat's and you'll find a myriad differences.

But that's not to say Seed's characters are bad, just Mary Sues. Both of them.

Now, onto The 2nd Existential Seed.

"Because i take time with my characters, make them have complex and have some qualities that make them actually likeable.

She isn't full on God either, she actually still has human qualities to her.

I respect you as a great user of this wikia, and congratulate you on your current and former acheivements for making this site great, but that comment just somewhat implies you either:

Hate my character for being insanely OP ( Whic lord knows there is probably more than one )

OR

My character is a generic archetypal ( which she actually represents several, i just didn't put the archypes in yet. )"

Now, I will congratulate you on trying to make your characters complex and having likeable qualities, but you've made your characters blatant Mary Sues, wish fulfillment incarnate. Hitomi is quite literally God, no matter how you try to spin it. You've given her immense powers and false shackles, a failed attempt at weaknesses that often pops up in God Mode Sues such as Hitomi.

"She's omnipotent but she has anxiety and is naive too! Sympathize with her!" is the most erroneous logic I've seen when it comes to character creation, the tell-tale sign of a Mary Sue/Gary Stu. So in essence, those human qualities you've given her fall flat on their face when the realization that she could easily do as she pleased and remove those "human qualities". In fact, it would be illogical to keep them, especially considering her omniscience.

Secondly, Cat does not hate your character. Your character is a generic archetype of a school girl given omnipotence. You could say "Harhui has omnipotence and she's a schoolgirl and everyone likes her!" but that comparison wouldn't work here. Harhui doesn't even know she has her powers and a plot can be formed around that. Hitomi KNOWS she has powers and uses them to do ridiculous feats all because....reasons?

Seriously, having your character defeat other characters from different franchises/series/games/etc. is another mark of a Mary Sue/Gary Stu. It's just seen as lazy and cowardly for an original character to do that. Just...no.

But, I suppose this comment is going to be deleted and no one will read this long rebuttal. Or they'll just say I'm harassing or some other bogus claim and ignore it. Either way, it only proves a point.