User blog comment:Dragon-Fox 7/Character Sheet/@comment-35822754-20180612012508/@comment-35822754-20180612045434

Tell how you think things could be made better, don't just tell what/how you hate it. Okay, good topic, like I said above, i'm not exactly creative, but just suggestions -I guess I'd probably start off with the images, rather than showing off the superiority of a powerful being with a love for humanity, i  think i  would go with  something less flashy, something that looks a bit more somber or gritty, seeing as how  the power of a god could isolate some individuals with connecting to other people,like doctor manhattan from watchmen( not to the point of being depressing though) -Personality could have a rewrite or change, instead of someone with intense naivete and optimism, the character above could have something that warps their perspective on things, rather than stating platitudes about how humanity is great, go for something more grounded or closer to reality, have traits that could hit close to home for some people -Love interest, rewrite the personality or have John be single with his duities as a protector preventing him from having his love. Not everything should be about feminitity, female  empowerment and sexuality, more the depth of  her character and  how she can be emotional support for John, have her interact with other characters(in a non-sexual manner) like having a brotherly, sisterly figure who could be an unassuming human for all we know. I could  still  think   of more, but I think this would  turn into an essay.