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It is not complete by any means, but I'd like to know how good it is so far. Any constructive criticism and suggestions welcome.

SECRETS OF THE MAGI

Chapter One: The Discovery.

Nya sighed in frustration as she tried, for what must have been the thousandth time today, to decipher the ancient and arcane text on the table before her.

From what the merchant had told her, this text when deciphered, would reveal the location of Yan-Soreth, the capital of the ancient Valeyan Empire.

Nya was skeptical of the merchants claim at first, since people had been creating counterfeit Valeyan artifacts for millennia, but when she saw the distinctly curved Valeyan symbols she knew the text was authentic.

Whether or not this specific text actually led to Yan-Soreth was another matter entirely. If it didn't then she would simply store it with all the other Valeyan manuscripts in her home and continue searching. If it did lead to Yan-Soreth however, she would run to the nearest guild and mount an expedition. No cost was to high and no distance too great when compared to the vast wealth of magical knowledge stored within the cities walls. 