User blog comment:Imouto-tan/Huozai/@comment-4867780-20160721070405

That's quite the impressive defenses you added :O So the overall idea is that Huozai has simply no weakness to exploit, no potential shortcut to victory ? And that the only way to take him down is to gradually wear down his tremendous life-force, by pummeling him over and over with everything you have, and bet on the very off-chance you'll eventually manage to outlast him ?

"I have a conscience. It's just...more selective."

As in, entirely focused on your immediate self-interest ? That's no conscience at all, pal ^ ^;

Hanabi Kirigakure gave birth to Ritsu before being captured by Huozai's thugs ? That means Ritsu isn't Huozai's daughter, doesn't it ?

I like the Legacy ending you gave to his biography, it explores the historical consequences of his actions in an interesting way, and open the way to interesting spin-off centered on his descendants, how they discover/handle their very special heritage, and how they find their place in a world that hates their forefather to the core.

A new part centered on his conquered territories/communities and how they recovered/rebuilt following his passing would be a valuable addition too, exploring the imprint he left behind and the path/future they chose for themselve.