User blog comment:Imouto-tan/Rachie Bakuzan/@comment-4867780-20151028074118

"Hey, you two lesbians who look like you’re from some erotic hentai novel"

...modest and respectful ? XD

I'm not sure how normal her attire is, but I certainly don't mind the view ^ ^

"rarely come out alive, with no exceptions."

Rarely implies exceptions, so an adjustment may be needed ;)

There seems to be some typo at the beginning of the "Abilities" section (the part before "Rachie").

A self-confident Reaper hottie dual-wielding giant scissor halves in place of scythe, ninja style ?

Cool, badass and original ! Well  done :)