User blog comment:Cursed warrior 343/Vel/@comment-30766268-20180826160607

oh, more story! quick sidenotes:

- I think it would be more interesting if after that transformation she woul djust ALWAYS look that way.

that's how other kingdoms could identify her from first glance.

just by seeing her grey hair and purple eyes.

- I think maybe her reaction to them trying to kill her and her family should be more toned down. she wa sin the black market, in the assasination's business. she should know very well what's happening when you mess up. or when things go south. she shouldn't be very surprised that they tried to kill her.

-as of the poisen thing, I can see why not many people knows about that, but I think it would be better that isntead of explaining to her that thing, the boss would simply mention the poisen, without explaining. just saying that those who use poisen, are enemies of everyone, without explaining.

then, she can learn later, maybe from lucius, abut the whole poisen thing that happened long time ago.

- I think that the ambush should have been more "delicate". like, she is manipulating poisen, she is an enemy of existence itself and a being that haven't been seen for YEARS. this is not something you can just ambush with normal weapons. they should have known that it may cause some issues. especially if they know that she may very well expect her to know they are going to kill her, as she kind of screwed up in the middle of the mission.