User blog comment:Imouto-tan/Nayuta Mitsuari/@comment-4867780-20160107120723

How did Nayuta manage to become a Wizard Saint without any magic of her own ? From what I understand, overwhelming magical abilities is a prerequisite for Saint candidates. Did she use her unmatched tactical skills to convincing/coercing into bestowing it to her ? Was is granted as a honorific title for the invaluable strategic asset she represents for her city ? Or maybe her unexpected quality of Jewel hints toward a secret mastery ? ;) Nice choice of word by the way, the mix of great magical talent and high social regard makes "Jewel" just perfect, as beautifully poetic as it is societaly fitting.

I like the way you infuse meaning in your characters' names. What is the refence of "huge number" regarding Nayuta ? A wink to her enocomic and political value, perhaps ?

Beauty Senpai ? Now, that is one flattering nickname ^ ^ Though considering how smart she is, I would have also expected an intelligence-related allusion, like "Genius Beauty" or something similar. Her main picture is well chosen on this regard, nicely reflecting her cool attractiveness and intellectual confidence.

I like how realistically this ascendency influences the way she interacts with other. It is a definite fact of life that particularly smart people tend to be manipulative and calculating even when kind-hearted, as they naturally put their talents to use whenever the occasion arises, like everyone spontaneously do in their favored field.

I can't help wondering what her "taming" by diredctor Tegami entails, she certainly doesn't seem the kind of person that would be easy to keep under control.

Background, third paragraph => "prior to his memory loss" (sound like a "her" to me in context).

All-around, Nayuta's sheer tactical intellect and manipulative skills definitely make her a force to reckon with. The most dangerous people usually aren't those with the greatest personal power, but rathr those who can control the flow of events and play others like fiddles.