User blog comment:DYBAD/Character Sheet/@comment-26993961-20160918125949

He really loves his women! ^^

In all seriousness, this is really good! Really really good! I love the level of detail you've put into everything, such as the momentos, and even the population control! It definitely seems that after he got his powers, he's went on the joy-ride of a lifetime, and created his own paradise along the way- with his personal hang-out turning into myriad worlds.

The past records do explain a lot about how he grew and developed his power and capabilities through experiences in many different worlds, and types of planes. You start off with "Lawrence’s first planar jump led him to the Milky Way of an alternate universe", so, how did he come to know he had these powers? How did he learn to use them to begin with in order to make this first jump? Did he known where he was going in this first jump?

I can definitely see a little Psychena in Selforge City and I love the fact that when you arrive into Selforge City, you're given the power to redefine yourself. I have to ask though, what are the limits on that? Like in Psychena, could you turn yourself in a bird? A clock? A humanoid of another species? Or is it strickly Human? With the strict "women-only" rule, what would happen if you wanted to change your gender, or can't you?

When a baby is born, what defines the traits of the child initially (since I doubt a child would have the maturaity or understanding to make use of their ability to redefine themselves), or is it simply genetic randomness like normal? Does a child have access to the ability to redefine themselves, since a child's ideals might often change? Having mentioned that, with his trips across planes, what're Lawrences opinions on females of other humanoid species, or is it strickly Human-like?

Finally, in regards to the Selforge Essence, is it a sliver of power which you can use to rereate the surroundings in Selforge City? Or can they funtion outside of Selforge? One last random question: do people need to eat or drink in Selforge? Can they still eat or drink? If so, what's the food and drink like there? ^^

I can also image many citizens spending a lot of time just exploring the inner planes, they sound fascinating, so I know I would!