User blog comment:Teruki/Character Notes: in progress./@comment-24051043-20140814133602

Id recomand answering questions like what does the cherecter do with his power how does it efect his normal life and what kind of obsticles does he have to overcome before he reaches  whatever goal he has in mind that kind of stuff. also I dont mean to be rude or anything but you made an error when  discribing your charecters origin you wrote  "he met an old lady whom he granted the power of telekinis"  what you most likely meant is that he met an old lady who granted him telekinisis.