User blog comment:Dragon-Fox 7/Character Sheet/@comment-26362471-20180423004817/@comment-4867780-20180423135105

Personally, I can't help getting a feel of "sexual overdose" from the last update pertaining to Anael's territory, which is both impressively massive and well-writen but with a somewhat obsessive focus on sexuality from beginning to end ^ ^;

It gives the general impression of a 24/7 free-for-all world-wide orgy, rather than a functional society of complex people. I realize sexuality is a big part of Anael's identity so it makes sense for it to play an important role, but there is also a lot more to her, while the current section dedicated to her territory is almost exclusively about sex in one form or another.

On a side note, I have a hard time reconciling the notions of "sexuality" and "holiness" given that sex is deeply wild and primal by nature, and while it can give an amazing high to both partners in the right conditions, the practical reality of it is anything but glorious ^ ^; Maybe I just lack imagination on this one, but I can't quite picture sexuality as a serious religion.

Sorry for not being more approving on this one, I guess it's just a matter of tastes. I did like the world-building updates you made to John's Home Islands a lot though.