User blog comment:Dragon-Fox 7/Character Sheet/@comment-4867780-20161024231100

I like the Balance and Duality Transcendence updates, it's a cool way to show that John is a free spirit thiking outside the box, while retaining inner peace and harmony. Even better with Life Trancendence, having found everlasting happiness by conquering death itself.

Meta Transcendence seems spot-on, nailing this limitless potential that is the core of John's Ultihuman's nature. Though maybe some kind of humanity-friendly anchor would a good addition, so that he doesn't get lost in his transcendence and ends up becoming a non-human entity over time.

...no wait, that's exactly what "New Human" and "Pure Nature" are about. Nevermind ^ ^

Trickster explore a fun pranking side of John, and Programmable Powers is definitely a must to make the best of the countless abilities he learnt, discovered and refined himself.

I'm quite fond of the Lifestyle section you refined recently, especially the "wander to see what else is out there, learning new powers, having great and endless adventures, partying wildly like there's no tomorrow and making new friends to share the glory in the experience". Exploration, discovery, learning, adventures, parties, friendship and sharing : now, that's one awesome life in a very attractive format :D

His Boundless Inner World is fascinating as well, creating endless worlds based on the memories from his adventures, essentially a revisited version past experience based on his own perspective. There's something really beautiful and poetic about it, that Lawrence's template-engineering approach doesn't quite live up to (really neat technically, but it lacks the sheer soul that John's world is so radiant with).

Even better since it works both as a safe haven for the innocent and atoning purgatory for evil doers, reconstructing their sense of empathy by turning the tables and teaching them first-hand what their victims went through, so this empathic suffering may enlighten the path in their future decisions, thus making them better persons on the long run.

John does seem to fit the god concept to a T in his Boundles Inner World, while Lawrence is more of a mix between national sponsor and all-rounder superstar in Selforge City. I guess he would fit the description in the Inner Planes, but Seira is the one in charge of their management, so she's the goddess rather than him. On the other hand he's her boss, so I guess it's even cooler in a way ^ ^

Outside of their home turf though, both John and Lawrence are just very powerful adventurers, with no fancy titles or strings attached, and that's how they like it 👍