Talk:Transcendent Angel Physiology/@comment-168.167.63.133-20130210082505/@comment-4714517-20130210091846

"beginning description on Capabilities is similar in all Physiologies, I use standard version to make things clearer", plus some grammatical details:

"of very immense power" - immense isn't enough?

They instead of The user, I try not to use either too many times in row.

"user will have abilities" - have

"to that of other" - to other

empty line to differentiate general from example, just a stylish detail, but I can remove it

"would be" - is



This page really could use less generic picture, that could be about any angel...