User blog comment:Emperors Arise/Character Sheet: Zenon Takis/@comment-4867780-20150723084407

His all-female family having so little interest in him is kinda strange, an only little boy in this context would likely draw a lot of maternal instinct and pampering. Him prefering to stuggle for survival on the street rather than live in a female-dominated house would even be comical if this period wasn't so damn hard for him ^ ^; And the 250 mile swim was outright surreal (especially considering his previous trainings had nothing in common with swimming), almost as much as him just spoting the island at such a distance in the first place XD

The Virtual God section sounds a little too sue-like to me, with a impressive list of broken defensive abilities having no particular connection between them, and no coherent identity as a whole, so it ends up feeling like shameless narrative cheating. The section could use some revamping to make sense of it, dispelling the sue feel and giving his abilities an immersive credibility.

Three billions people on islands ? And islands small enough to be associated with New York in particular, rather than the West Coast ? How is than possible ? ^ ^; Unless he use spatial manipulation to fit a gigantic place in a small area, and even this way would make Zaffre CIty an alternate dimension rather than an earthly location.