User blog comment:Dragon-Fox 7/Character Sheet/@comment-27453378-20161111205902/@comment-4867780-20161120104238

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Great work done on the Aspects of Omnipotence, well-writen and attractively organized, with clear and simple explanations completed by a comfortable visual harmony.

The Collective Arsenal was harder to pull since it is by nature a wide assortment of misc abilities collected on the job, but you managed to nicely organize them into a handful of general categories. It would probably gain from re-mastering said categories though, at the moment they are hard to distinguished from one another. Maybe more objective-relevant theme would be better suited ? Like Combat, Stealth/Deception, Utility/Tricks, Creativity and so on, assembling then into stylish packages centered on their typical "mission". Lastly, "Collected" Arsenal would probably be more fitting than "Collective", which has a strong "Hive Mind" vibe that doesn't match what the Arsenal actually is.

The Physical and Mental sides of the Core Aspects are well done too, though the Spiritual and Existential ones would likely gain from a simpler and clearer organization, in their current state it's hard to tell what they are about. It's understandable though, these two are much more elusive by nature, and thus difficult to coherently structure. The best approach would probably be to select 3-4 main powers, that would act as gravity centers and selectively attract the most similar abilities, resulting in a clear-cut roots/branches organization just like in the Physical/Mental Aspects.

Great work with the Outer Spheres, you managed to do exactly that but which more more powers, which makes the hamonious result all the more impressive :)

All in all, the "Limitless Potential" section really lives up its name, and would make any reader drool over the boundless possibilities it is so alluringly extolling, including myself ^ ^