Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-23758952-20130927015655/@comment-4867780-20140924011934

Well done ! It's important to think about the audience when writing, it usually makes your work much more successful.

Just read most of it, and it's kind of hard to tell what Alan can't do. New powers seem to be poping up along the way without much connection, but I can see some structure in them :

Supernatural Condition => Demonic Physiology => Super Form

Telekinesis => Elemental Manipulation => Spiritual Manipulation

Telepathy => Soul Manipulation

That's a lot of very different abilities, so it's important to organize them in coherent "trees" and find them a common ground (or a specific origin for each) to make such a diversified powered set.

In this case, demon are powerful supernatural entities that are both physical and spiritual, so basing his abilities on a strong demonic ascendency combined to high genetic compatibility from your human parent could reasonably make your character superpowerful and polyvalent.