User blog comment:Teruki/Character Notes: in progress./@comment-24051043-20140903150216

Another thing you can do is work on the charecters origin and see if any posibility. Start by specifying who the old lady is and why she gave Alois super power. Like if the old lady was an alien in disguise who gave him super powers you can have some evil aliens or a men in black style organization as the bad guy. Or maybe the old lady was some sort of a mental construct created by his subconsciousness to awaken his latent powers and he is now forced to combat mental constructs representing his inner insecurities or something.

As  for your spelling its not that big a deal but if you whant you can allways google words your not sure about or in programs like word.