User blog comment:AncientAlphaGear/Alex Iuden (FINAL VERSION, COMPLETE REWORK)/@comment-35485042-20160601153427

After quite a long analysis I have come up with my critic of Alex :3! Prepare thyself!

So my review began yesterday before I came down with the sniffles and began sneezing myself into oblivion. But that's aside from the point I shall give you my negatives then positives.

(Key: Posiive (+), Negative (-), Neutral (=) )

- Nothing, be it power or user can be stronger then Omnipotence. Doesn't matter what you do, Omnipotence is the ultimate limit of limitless. Not to mention you cannot be omnipotent in a area that is NOT your fiction. It's a legitimate restriction in the omnipotent page you can look for yourself.

- Alex seems kinda bland, Perhaps work on his personality a little more, and fix up some grammar errors in the backstory ^^; ? If you want I can help with this

= I do like the fact that he self earned his Omnipotence via fusion with the 'omnipotent' being from his fiction. However. This would mean that the omnipotent being was nothing much than just another aspect of Alex, and that Alex was always the omnipotent being of his fiction. Quite literally just that you grabbed the omnipotent being (aka Author Avatar aka you) and fused it with Alex (aka the main character of your fiction basically.)

+ I do like the pictures and how organized things have gotten from the previous versions.

= I recommend to make this even more interesting is add Heading (3rd type) which would create seperations in the backstory more (maybe even add more backstory thanks to it :p?)

+ If things are correct, this means his physical avatar is High Nigh-Omnipotent meaning he's quite op. But it's good in the case that if he were to die he could easily be recreated ;3

That's my review right now ^^; I'm a little sick so in sorry if it's not as professional as all my others, but good job anyways :D!