User blog comment:Imouto-tan/Vera Arcturus/@comment-4867780-20170627213834

Too much darkness in the first half of Vera's backstory (rough up to the "Ultimate One-Man Army project), it really gives you the urge to stop reading and turn away. Remember not everyone has your high level of tolerance towards these things, especially when it is so very personal (unlike wars and catastrophes befalling anonymous masses for example, no one really caring about them by lack of relatability), and that you don't have to put a character through strings of deshumanizing atrocities to make them interesting, most audiences simply looking for entertaining adventures in relatively family-friendly format.

On this regard, the second part of her backstory is quite good, it is with great interest that you follow Vera's travels and battles by her comrades' side, her eventual return to peaceful civil life and fresh new start as a teacher, and ultimately her promotion as instructor of Destiny City's most prestigious military unit.

It would gain from precisions regarding key elements of the described events though, like what exactly are the Magical Girl core and Bergentrückung, who are Solution Zero and Magical Girl: Apocalypse, how they all relate to each other and to the story as a whole. In short : what's what, who's who, what's going on and for which reasons, so the audience may easily make sense of what they are reading ^ ^