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@Angelic Demon1 Switchblade name idea
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@Angelic Demon1 Can you redo the description of Source Cards, as they aren't tied to the Gods at all... also state they exist ten source cards even though their exist nine yakuza. And that Kosei's is connected to Kadmon, the concept of Adam and humanity itself and is basically its physical body and mind, as such he is unkillable as long as Kadmon exists.
@Angelic Demon1 Update for Source Card of Sin, use this to help. it can be used as the ultimate defense some how.
Here on this text;
The Source Card of Sin. Kosei's Talent is {Form of Vice} which manifests as his Sin Perceiving Eyes. These eyes are able to peer into the hearts of others and see the sins that weigh on them; which seep out to shroud them into a Sin Aura. Sin Auras are the culmination of sinful energy that an individual accumulates as they commit sins. It is their flaws, crimes and dark desires that make the structure of their Sin Aura. Every one has a location where their Sin Aura is strongest, and in Kosei's eyes he can clearly perceive the Fatal Flaw of an individual within this Sin Aura locus; a Fatal Flaw is an individual's great weakness and 'ultimate sin'. If Kosei manages to attack this point, he will be able to cause the Fatal Flaw to erupt and cause immense damage to the soul of the target. If an individual dies to his Talent, he is able to resurrect them as a mindless slave to him and his allies.
@Angelic Demon1 Are you busy, respond as fast as possible.
@Angelic Demon1 It has been two days!? Since you last responded to me... I just need your help
@Angelic Demon1 Can please make a finalized version of The Source Card of Sin, I want you use this to help.
Here is the current text;
The Source Card of Sin. Kosei's Talent is {Form of Vice} which manifests as his Sin Perceiving Eyes. These eyes are able to peer into the hearts of others and see the sins that weigh on them; which seep out to shroud them into a Sin Aura. Sin Auras are the culmination of sinful energy that an individual accumulates as they commit sins. It is their flaws, crimes and dark desires that make the structure of their Sin Aura. Every one has a location where their Sin Aura is strongest, and in Kosei's eyes he can clearly perceive the Fatal Flaw of an individual within this Sin Aura locus; a Fatal Flaw is an individual's great weakness and 'ultimate sin'. If Kosei manages to attack this point, he will be able to cause the Fatal Flaw to erupt and cause immense damage to the soul of the target. If an individual dies to his Talent, he is able to resurrect them as a mindless slave to him and his allies.
@Angelic Demon1 Can you update the summary of Source Cards such as removing them being connected to Gods and also take some inspiration from Angels (Date A Live)
Source Card: Beliyya'al (What this version of the Source Card of Sin would be called and the power would be improved)
Manifestation: (The way it manifests)
@Angelic Demon1 Can you update Source Cards, like removed the god connection thing and take inspiration from Angels and Demon Kings (Date A Live), specifically the Qliphoth Tree and the Sephirot Tree part. There exists in total 20 Source Cards
Also Kosei's Source Card would be
Source Card: Lucifugus (ルキフグス, Rukifugusu)
Manifestation: Necklace (The way it manifests, it can manifest in more than one way)
The abilities of Lucifugus are:
The names of the abilities would be completely original and but still has a connection obviously to what the move does.
Magic 🪄 and Skills
What do you think?