Enhanced Dexterity: The user can precisely control their movements and muscles, making them unable to be clumsy or fumbling. They can slip through a network of lasers, reach through dangerous narrow tunnels, keep perfect balance, or juggle effortlessly without ever tripping or wobbling. The user can even move their finger or toes effortlessly, with tendon strain no longer being a problem.
That said, manual dexterity (needs better name) could work as a sub-power of ED. --Kuopiofi (talk) 19:52, July 19, 2018 (UTC)
Team Manipulation: Support Powers "enhance the performance of oneself or others", that's it. No mention about numbers and the Capabilities simply lists the obvious enhancements. You could add skills/relationships without any problem.
It is a good power idea but rename it Schema Manipulation and you are good to go.
a representation of a plan or theory in the form of an outline or model.
"a schema of scientific reasoning"
a syllogistic figure.
(in Kantian philosophy) a conception of what is common to all members of a class; a general or essential type or form.
Satisfied that those pages have been deleted ? Yes. Satisfied about the state of some of the pages and the fact that some pages still exist ? No. But thanks anyway ^^ Demotivator←Doyoufeeldemotivated ¿→ 16:32, August 1, 2018 (UTC)
The details are on the page. DYBAD (talk) 02:25, August 2, 2018 (UTC)
Focus on upgrading them to standard quality before creating new ones, then. The concepts are good but the pages themselves are seriously lacking (especialy the Capabilities, it's like they were purposely made the shortest possible). The same clearly applies to the ones you linked as well, let's not use bad stuff to justify doing more of it ^ ^; DYBAD (talk) 03:59, August 2, 2018 (UTC)
So it's about Elemental Variation creations? Are those really needed? --Kuopiofi (talk) 04:19, August 2, 2018 (UTC)
Fine by me. I was going to do some later. However, as long as they get added, it's okay. Interesting powers, but anytime articles are made without users, just seems incomplete to me. Good luck. Kusarigama (talk) 04:54, August 2, 2018 (UTC)
Now that I've had bit time to think about it, main problem might be that there was a cluster of them created at once instead of beings spread over time. Even few hours between them and no-one had really paid attention. --Kuopiofi (talk) 05:09, August 2, 2018 (UTC)
Works for me ^ ^ Good night Crystal. DYBAD (talk) 05:27, August 2, 2018 (UTC)
Telekinesis Physiology was deleted ? Shame, it really had something awesome to it, like being literally "made of strength", that you can channel for many TK-related effects with a physiological touch, both internally (super speed / strength / resilience, flight) and externally (shockwaves, bladeshifting, projectiles, beams). Hmm... Maybe "Telekinetic Force Physiology" instead ? Basically the same thing, but with some sort of "stuff" for users to be made of and give the physiology a tangible feel (naturally invisible but very much real).
I created the page and locked it for 24h, so you can figure out if you want to make it without someone 'stealing' the idea in the meantime (since you're the creator of the original version which was deleted). If so I will delete it tomorrow and you can recreate it yourself, otherwise it will just stay deleted and maybe someone else will pick it up later.
Why was Speed Defense deleted, by the way ? High speed is perfect for both dodging and parrying, it obviously has a great deal of defensive potential. DYBAD (talk) 06:30, August 2, 2018 (UTC)
User is made up of or can transform their body completely into telekinetic force. Users transformed form can be either anatomically identical to their normal form, aside from being made of energy, in which case it contains all organs and is somewhat vulnerable to attacks. Alternately user can transform into homogenous matter, without any part of their form being more important than the other.
Users that are Nigh Formed Telekinetic Beings are or can change into mostly physical beings, with the telekinetic force flowing through their being, fortifying their cells, bones and muscles. Their power is mostly focused to their bodies and while they gain some amount of energy-attacks, the changes and applications are mostly internal.
User that is Full-Formed Telekinetic Beings are completely formed out of telekinetic force, without anything truly left from their physical form. They gain impressive control over their form and the capacity to expel vast amounts of force in various ways.
Good Luck on the new page Imouto 17:59, August 2, 2018 (UTC)Imouto-tan
Good point, so maybe create both Speed Defense/Attack later once Telekinetic Force Physiology is finished and the upgrading of recently created pages is complete.
I deleted the TFP placeholder page by the way, you may recreate it and adjust the original version with the force-related touch it needed.
I suggest avoiding the overclassical Nigh Form / Full Form format though (pretty tedious imo), and just go with your guts in describing all the awesome stuff the user could be/do with it (as a physiology power the two are closely associated), and picking the applications that best illustrate it. In my experience, that's how you inspire readers and create this sense of wonder that makes superpowers so enjoyable to read about.
Enjoy ^ ^ DYBAD (talk) 22:38, August 2, 2018 (UTC)
Sure my ears are open Imouto 01:55, August 3, 2018 (UTC)Imouto-tan
Did you seriously just copy-paste the content from the deleted page, and called the job done ? Then what was the point of bringing it back ? If it's all the effort you're willing to input into it, I'll just redo it myself.
Those all sound good to me :) Imouto 02:50, August 3, 2018 (UTC)Imouto-tan
The current page does fits the standard format for this type, but it is really far below the gem it could be with a little investment. I realize you are generally more into quantity than quality, so you may not be willing to put in the time needed to realize its potential. On my end, I'm prepared to do all the necessary work to transform it into a great power, but not if someone else takes the credit ^ ^;
What do you think ? Will you improve it yourself ? Or do you prefer continuing to create new ones ?
Well, if I am to redo the page myself I'd rather have the "creator" status that goes along, otherwise it kinda feels like working for free to someone else's benefit ^ ^; I contacted you about it to give you the chance of owning the new-and-improved power since you created the original page, but somehow I seem to be the only one interested in making it happen.
Thank you ^ ^ DYBAD (talk) 04:05, August 3, 2018 (UTC)
Auditory Muscle Memory/Literary Muscle Memory: Too limited as separate powers.
Capacity/Effectiveness Intuition: pretty sure we have this.
Accelerated Adaptation: might be covered by some power already... --Kuopiofi (talk) 04:27, August 4, 2018 (UTC)
Memory powers: combine and expand the idea.
Accelerated Adaptation: goa ahead.
Capacity/Effectiveness Intuition: go ahead but figure better name. --Kuopiofi (talk) 05:16, August 4, 2018 (UTC)
Hmm that name could work too Imouto 01:40, August 5, 2018 (UTC)Imouto-tan
As pointed out before, I didn't do the deleting (although the reason makes sense).
So it would basically be a social sub-power of Luck, with things always going your way during interaction with others ? Sounds good to me, while we do have various powers granting social success, I don't thing we have any that covers the general probabilities surrounding it.
Though "Social Perfection" may not be the most suited name, since it seems to imply some personal perfection on the user's part, while the power only affects the outside. Maybe "Social Luck" ? Since it's about being highly lucky in all social situations.
Go ahead with both. --Kuopiofi (talk) 05:18, August 15, 2018 (UTC)
Greetings. Hope you are well. I saw your proposed power to Imouto and wanted to let you know that there was already a Multi-Directional Dash power on this wiki and it got deleted. As far as I can remember, I believe you were the one who created it. I even copied the page as a reference when it comes to deleted powers. Thought you might like to know.
Vector Crocodile (Sonic the Hedgehog) has shown to use this ability in Knuckles' Chaotix.
Dash in any direction.
The power to dash in any direction.
• Directional Dash/Dashing
• Multi-Directional Dashing
The user can dash in (almost) any direction, including forwards, backwards, sideways, upwards, downwards, diagonally, etc.
It was removed for being too similar to Flash Step, sorry but I am going to have to say no Imouto 21:26, August 15, 2018 (UTC)Imouto-tan
I brought it back Imouto 22:09, August 15, 2018 (UTC)Imouto-tan
Hey, surprised you and me both then Crystal. Not your fault either, I get that you'd want to keep something you've made.
I understand it's not exclusively a "stepping" power (Sonic has his Spin Dash etc), but it all feels redundant as one can dash in any direction they so desire. To be honest, Flash Step is literally about getting from A to B as quickly as possible. It may visually look like teleportation, but it definitely isn't teleportation ("moving faster than the eye can see"). Also, it's not restricted by direction either, as Flash Step users are known to be able to Flash Step in literally any and all directions (up, down, left, right, forward, backwards etc).
I see you changed the page to "Directional Air Dash", though that would still be covered entirely by Air Dashing (it already has the limitation "May be unable to change directions while dashing" which implies most users can Air Dash in any direction anyway). Demotivator←Doyoufeeldemotivated ¿→ 22:41, August 15, 2018 (UTC)
Fair enough, I can see the effort ! While again, I think the new change still doesn't cut it, I'ma see if I can think of a Dashing variant myself to help you out.
Okay... so it might sound like a bit of a stretch, but how about this: "Elemental Dash" The power to perform bursts of speed using the elements allowing the user to move faster than the eye can track, making it appear as if they have teleported. Combination of Elemental Enhanced Condition and Flash Step. Variation of Elemental Speed. I can't think of any users off the top of my head, but I'm pretty sure there are characters that can literally Flash Step short (or long) distances using an element of some sort.
As for why she randomly restored a formerly deleted page, this is coming from the same admin that makes comments like "Demo and Sage made the dinosaurs gay"...[Template fetch failed for https://community.fandom.com/wiki/Template:SipsTea?action=render]Demotivator←Doyoufeeldemotivated ¿→ 23:17, August 15, 2018 (UTC)
Just showing you that it is too similar to similar to Flash Step as Demo's comment points out Imouto 23:19, August 15, 2018 (UTC)Imouto-tan
work on it to see if you can make it different for now Imouto 23:28, August 15, 2018 (UTC)Imouto-tan
Doable, but "one or fewer steps"? --Kuopiofi (talk) 02:23, August 17, 2018 (UTC)
Check the message I answered. --Kuopiofi (talk) 18:16, August 24, 2018 (UTC)
"Maybe I should at least rename the power or something? It still allows for more control over movements than FC, which still has its limits in terms of control, by the way." --Kuopiofi (talk) 20:23, August 24, 2018 (UTC)
Which would make it...? --Kuopiofi (talk) 04:34, August 25, 2018 (UTC)
Specialness Immunity - might work as Limitation Bypassing or something like that, specialness is just... well.
Chronological Creation - OK. --Kuopiofi (talk) 05:28, October 8, 2018 (UTC)
Expand Specialness Immunity to Limitation Bypassing or something like that and have fun. --Kuopiofi (talk) 13:50, October 8, 2018 (UTC)
Enhanced Judgment: idea needs work and name has to go.
Rapid System Development: don't we already have this? --Kuopiofi (talk) 15:05, October 9, 2018 (UTC)
That's mainly on Accelerated Body Developments Capabilities, Applications says it's full condition. Would Editing it to cover whole body do the trick? Condition must be changed to Body anyway... --Kuopiofi (talk) 15:30, October 9, 2018 (UTC)
Well, it's your power so do what you want. --Kuopiofi (talk) 16:05, October 9, 2018 (UTC)
Might want to go just with Common Sense. Unless you go for the Decision version, in which case enhanced decision works fine. No point going for fancy if on the nose works. --Kuopiofi (talk) 20:33, October 9, 2018 (UTC)
Dimensional Reincarnation: there's nothing in Reincarnation to prevent this already.
Figure Travel: too specific/limited. --Kuopiofi (talk) 04:17, October 12, 2018 (UTC)
Call it Enhanced Maneuverability or something like that. --Kuopiofi (talk) 05:20, October 12, 2018 (UTC)
Not the thing but the idea of thing? --Kuopiofi (talk) 15:17, October 19, 2018 (UTC)
Well, your explanations are about that clear. --Kuopiofi (talk) 15:36, October 19, 2018 (UTC)
Show me what kind of Capabilities you're planning. --Kuopiofi (talk) 15:54, October 19, 2018 (UTC)
The user can manipulate the 'inner nature of things, or the underlying reality or essence/nature of all phenomena, mainly outward appearances.
What? Inner nature is outward appearance? --Kuopiofi (talk) 18:22, October 19, 2018 (UTC)
Rest of it wasn't any clearer either, so try again. --Kuopiofi (talk) 18:30, October 19, 2018 (UTC)
Fels bit clunky still but doable. You wouldn't have any Wikipedia link to add? --Kuopiofi (talk) 20:35, October 19, 2018 (UTC)
Your AEM power . . . weird. Just weird. Seems like taking a whole bunch of powers and throwing them together like making stew. Can't say I like it but I don't dislike it either. Just weird. So what is this character you are making? Kusarigama (talk) 01:58, October 21, 2018 (UTC)
Interesting. Sounds like someone who is using planets for a game of marbles or bowling. Is this for a comic or a fanfiction? Kusarigama (talk) 02:04, October 21, 2018 (UTC)
Well. The level of interest in the novel depends on the story. What the character is like. How is it that they can control worlds the way they do. What circumstances and endeavors they experience. As for your AEM power, whether or not you want it deleted is up to you. In terms of altered states of consciousness, I think those are well covered by Mental Manipulation, Illusion Manipulation and Astral Plane Manipulation. As for this power, its uniquely inclusive and murky nature could enable its continuation on the site. But it is up to you. I myself have had to argue with others concerning powers I've made to make sure they did not get deleted. Never wrote about having one erased unless it already existed. That being said, think it over. If you want it deleted, tell the admins to do it and work on the next one. And see if you can have users prepared. A Known Users list can grant perspective and understanding when it comes to an article. Kusarigama (talk) 02:23, October 21, 2018 (UTC)
So he becomes a god-like being who must defend his planet and others against destructive god-like beings? Kusarigama (talk) 02:50, October 21, 2018 (UTC)
Sounds interesting. What will make it compelling will ultimately be the story. Is this fantasy? Science fiction? Space opera? However it turns out, I wish you the best in your writing. Will this be a labor of love or a possible career move? Kusarigama (talk) 02:58, October 21, 2018 (UTC)
No problem. Break a leg. Kusarigama (talk) 03:03, October 21, 2018 (UTC)